Hello everyone! Welcome to the second half of the year. How is it already July, you ask? How is it only July, you ask? Time has no meaning! Give us your updates

Hi all. So I posted a version of this query back in February, but I've done a major manuscript revision on it since and just recently started querying again. It

I've had really great feedback for my past two versions ([first](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1lbxokh/qcrit_adult_fantasy_the_witches_of_haddon_98k

Hi, long time no post. I stepped away from my query to reattempt with fresh eyes. Curious if this one lands better. I'm also wondering if I should swap one of t

Hi Friends, When you're on sub, how many times will your agent nudge an editor before assuming they're not interested or ghosting? Or, is there a certain numb

Hi again! Thanks everyone for the previous feedback. It was extremely helpful. I hope it comes through in this revision. Edit: I should add, I'm not 100% on th

Hey everyone, I participated in #SmallPitch and got a request from CamCat Publishing. I'm doing some research and would love to know if anyone has dealt with th

Hi everyone! I've been working on my first query and would appreciate any feedback that comes to mind. Dear \[Agent\], I feel your interest in \[personaliz

Hello, all. I'm cautiously optimistic that this is an improvement. My main problems were my blurb and my comps, so please tell me anything that still needs work

Hello! I submitted a few poems to a lit mag via Submittable a while ago and recently got an email from someone at PocketMFA saying they were “genuinely impresse

Greetings PubTips, I posted this query and first 300 [previously](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1lqyydx/qcrit_scifi_those_who_do_not_contribute_71k

\[Intro/Comps\] All Lily has ever wanted is a home. When her orphanage burns down in an attack that kills her best friend, Ysabel, Lily is suddenly untethered.

Hi, this is my second attempt at a query letter. One thing I find a bit difficult is due to the slice of life nature, many plot beats don't sound like plot beat

Dear Agent, Getting kicked out of home because her cursed-to-be-a-spider grandma made a deal with a demon was the last way Panha had imagined it happening. Bei

Dear Agent All it takes is one simple word to have all you desire. The only cost is your soul… Ayela seeks only to protect her foster siblings from the abuse

Hi all, I had another query up here a little while ago and I've scrapped and restarted it. Hopefully this one is a step in the right direction. I'll be rem